Hi Suzanne and everybody else!
Well, I suppose this will get me into trouble, but here's my mini-manifesto (which sounds like the name of a small Italian car, doesn't it?)
SuzyV wrote:
As to the line: "I know how it is when something is gone" - one
of you questioned whether the writer of the song (me) really can write
and sing that line with credibility. After all I HAVE all my limbs
- how I can I presume to write about someone who has suffered to that degree?
I think that is a fair question.
Hmm, is it really? Because this question makes silent presumptions, namely
a) that there is a coherent, stable and self determined subject which is conscious of itself and his/her relation to the world and which can describe "real" events accurately,
b) that this subject can express his/her feelings and thoughts directly via the medium language, which s/he has control over,
c) that this medium is transparent and capable of reflecting the world.
I don't think that a writer is only allowed to write about what s/he has experienced. After all no one would state that a painter is only allowed to paint what s/he has seen (which would make Dali, Picasso, Ernst and Carrington an impossibility). And I do not think that a writer has to express/describe an actual event or something that has "really" happened to him/her. Because I don't think that one can reduce language to a sole function it can not fulfill: the transmission of information. Mimesis, mirroring of an empirical world is not what words can do. I don't think that language refers to anything but itself. And I don't think that there are "real" events or objective facts. At least nothing of this kind that can be expressed by language.
SuzyV continues:
I won't answer it for you. All you can do really is
look at the work as a whole (I mean all of it, including the prose writing
and unreleased songs), and make a judgement. Is the writer of the song
feeling melancholy and sorry for herself? (Well, sometimes I do.)
Which would render the song not credible? Or has she experienced
some kind of brutality (your word) that would allow you to believe that
she is a reliable source of this information?
No, no, no... I think this is the wrong approach. It's not about authenticity. It's not about whether the author has expressed a genuine feeling. It's about whether s/he has expressed something in a genuine way! And I don't want a reliable narrator. I don't believe in a coherent, language-mastering author-subject-god-whatever. I believe that the author is dead. After all it's not the singer that kills you, it's the song. And when I'm reading "Feather & Bone" I don't get goose pimples and tears in my eyes because I think: "Wow, Suzanne has really had a hard time" but because this beautifully crafted language takes control of me, burns itself into my tongue and infects my body and my mind. It infects me because of its imaginative and not because of its mimetic power.
Of course this is not what I wanted to say. "It is impossible to say
just what I mean" but I can give you three quotations which explain more
than *my* awkward attempt to master language:
"I can barely touch my own self. How can I touch someone else? I am
just an advertisement for a version of myself" - david byrne
"Language is what other people call a machine" - the nerve bible
"This machine will not communicate the thoughts and the strain I am
under" - radiohead
Well, of course it all comes down to ideology, and please don't get
me wrong: I'm not saying that my ideology is more valid than any other.
It's just another view of things.
So don't be angry with me but
remember me,
philipp
(the sometimes annoying smart-ass)
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Hi,
this is the time for a round of sympathy for me. Because it's been a
hard weekend. Our manager has dumped us. I'm not sure what made him our
manager because he never managed to manage anything for us. Well, now he
won't even *try* to manage anything for us anymore. He is now managing
a band that is doing AC/DC cover songs... Then a pipe burst in the flat
downstairs so the whole building has no water for the rest of the weekend
and the coming week. And I'm sitting on the third floor in the hot and
humid evening gazing over the city and I know that I just have to do SOMEthing
so I won't lose my last sense of self respect. But it's this kind of evening
when you suddenly realize that you will never write a good line again (and
have you ever?), and you will never write a great melody again (and have
you ever?) and if your songs were good then why have you've been replaced
by a band that is covering AC/DC? The usual answer (namely that what you
do is simply too sophisticated and way too avantgarde to be commercially
successful or to be appreciated by anybody who is less sophisticated or
avantgarde than you) won't comfort you, which is bad because you only had
this one. This one and the truth. And it can't drive away these thoughts
that scare the shit out of you: and what are you going to do with your
life? Not writing, not singing. That's so painfully clear this evening,
even though the air is thick and your mind is dizzy.
Somewhere along these lines I've lost the I and switched to you. The
usual self-protection. But maybe I'm just another victim of the total eclipse
of the sun next week. Historic as well as hysteric event: no other topic
in the news. Crazed gunmen in America and peace talks in Israel and Ireland
have suddenly shrunk to 15-seconds-overtures of the weather forecast. What
will happen? Will space station Mirr crash onto earth? Will Jerry Springer
become President? Will all David Byrne songs come true? That would be a
fun apocalypse for a change! Other than this dull entropic decline called
culture. But I guess everything will stay just as it was before. Except
that the fine line between song and sign will blur even more.
You've guessed it. I'm so busy feeling sorry for myself that I forget
to breathe. Which is not a healthy thing. So send your sympathy (or $100)
to the usual address.
<SV CONTENT>
I was wondering if anybody was interested in a copy of The Video Singles.
It's a private copy I made for a friend's birthday but he owned one already.
It's a VHS PAL SECAM cassette so please be sure your machine can handle
this format. I once bought a SV concert-video in the States and found out
at home that there *is* a difference between video cassette and video cassette.
That was when I still believed in the infinite power of technology, before
I've tried to connect my modem to my PC...
</SV CONTENT>
Okay, I'll wait for the water to be turned on again, continue listening
to David Byrne and try to figure out what to do with my life. Maybe I'll
learn some AC/DC songs...
I don't know how to suture
what I read and what I write.
Still I know that the future
will be beautiful and bright.
That's a happy chorus sung to a sad melody. But even if all is lost
I'll always have your sympathy.
remember me,
philipp
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I've just learned that the universe is expanding infinitely. I saw
a documentation on ARTE and they said that the universe is expanding infinitely.
Wait! That's not what I thought would happen! That's not what they have
promised us!! I thought it would all come back to us, it would all fall
back upon us. All matter reunited in a single spot, melting of good and
bad of far and near of then and now. But instead: infinite expansion, things
are getting further and further away. For ever. How depressing is this?
I feel cheated!
It's 23:15 and David Byrne is singing with the crickets. I know sometimes I can be wrong. I'll be wrong until you're next to me. I'll be wrong until you're next to me. Think again, Dave! Nothing's going to come back! What's lost is infinitely lost, speeding away forever.
In the house across the streets the woman is lying on the bed, talking
to someone on the telephone. Red trousers, white shirt, blonde hair and
black phone. The only thing that is certain to return is the longing and
the loss. They will stay with me. I wish I could touch you. I just wish
I'd find a sense of comfort SOMEwhere.
CAN COMPLAINING BE ENOUGH?
i don't know what to do
i don't know what to do
i will remeber you
but how can i
when you're drifting away from me
in an infinite motion
ever onwards
pushed by something
that i don't understand
and the sweetness of the music
mocks the bitterness of your death
when you are so distant that i miss you
no words
And since we had nothing better to do we started to make up a poem.
We wanted it to be *really* bad, so obviously crap that everybody would
notice at once. It went like this:
"Fight" |
Tried to chat with some people. visited a room for literary
discussions. How depressing. 23 year-olds doing their Ph.D. at Oxford.
I feel like a looser. Yeah! Yeah! Die schlimmen Gedanken
kommen jetzt auch am Tag. The bad thoughts are coming in the middle
of the day now, too. Wenn ich nicht aufpasse und
vor mich hinträume when I'm not alert but daydreaming dann
kommen sie und nisten sich ein then they are coming and they stay
and they make me insane.
undesirable future
I am 26. I am afraid.
Okay, schluß mit lustig... Muss mich an die Linguistik
Hausarbeit setzen. But before a couple of bewildering but positive things
that have happened the past days. (I just realize that I'm hungry - gonna
get myself something, be right back
back again (with three barrs of chocolate.
1st : got two new tapes from the undertow-tape-tree-tape. And it
starts with two songs by Joni Mitchell, the second one being "Coming from
the Cold" - and listening to it felt like a refilling. Great, great stuff!
2nd : Inga's name will be on the front cover of Das Paris der Beauvoir.
YES!
3rd : got mail. Which confuses me. Try to explain later.
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Sunday evening Uwe & Christiane came to visit us and it felt good talking to some sensible people. we agreed that the world is bad, all people who are more successful are dumb Yuppies, all who know more are smart-asses. Society is anti-art and anti-creativity and against arty and creative people such like us. Failing is a protest against the capitalistic, anti-intellectual structures of society. Basically we agreed that we are a bunch of beautiful losers. |
Sunday morning I downloaded my mail and received this letter which
was posted to Undertow:
When I read the mail I was very impressed by the force of tha language and the imagery and I though that I can realte very well to it and then when I came across the line with my name I felt like my heart was standing still. Can you imagine, dear reader, how I felt? I leaned back and looked again but still there it was: my name and even more: my name in the same sentence as Suzanne's and even more: connected by an "and".Subject: levels of edit
Date: Sat, 14 Aug 1999 23:03:58 -0400 (EDT)
From: Electrngun@aol.com
To: undertow@vega.netHello tow,
Forgive me, I'm drunk. My girlfriend has gone off to Iowa to be with her
nieces, and I'm here with my dog. So I'm drinking lots of beer and listening
to Lou Reed's Magic and Loss: not a good combination. I'm thinking of my
father, who's been dead for 3 years."If I close my eyes, I see your face
and I'm not without you...
If I try hard and concentrate
I'm not without you...
If I try hard I can see your face
and I'm not without you"Oh hell. There's no one I'd rather share this with than you, and although
you're a wonderful bunch o' people, that's pathetic as all hell.The impossibility of making herself understood in any way
at seven in the morning on the day of your death
i saw you in the kitchen
did not speak to you
thought i'd see you lateron such a night as this
on such a night
the usual relay of twilights
if there had been another hour
on such a nightcan i make this any plainer?
*written March 21: 11:30 am*
this delicate day in late March
late morning
reading Ginsburg
stared down the long relay of twilight to darkness
then the door opens & gold on your face
dog sitting in sunlit window
my skull resting on pillow
aching skull & sad heartno: this writing is not exempt: it remains like all writing a pathetic
attempt to make you understand that *my heart is breaking*if you could speak
what would you say?no beer left, but still conscious. i should make it clear that i only drink
once in a great while, like every couple months, because of the generally
predictable and hellishly sad results: ergo, this drivel.my god: what solitude are you in now?
my only father lying facedown on the garage floor
frozen wondering
was summer ever coming?do you see those birds?
i stared down the long relay of twilight
north american timei would stop all clocks for you
i would laugh in death's face for youi would kiss you if you'd let me
these drunken thoughts
these Saturday thoughtsthe tiger, embellishing itself --
one of my favorite lines from any poem is by Sylvia Plath, and it goes like
this:
"You are the one solid the spaces lean on, envious."every goddamn time i read that, i think: i'll never be that, no one will ever
feel that way about me.all these fairy tales swallowed by night
all these things i tell myselfi hate what this life does to people. i remember when i would write in my
apartment before i went to work. i remember copying poems by Jorie Graham
and carrying them in my pocket. i loved the feeling of pen on paper,
creating something out of nothing: ex nihilio. black letters of fire.thinking now of Philipp Hoffman and Suzy V. wishing i could impress with
words.the problem is the door and finding its opening.
i must name myself and give that name meaning. i think these things are up
to me.i can find my way in solitude: does not scare me. i know it terrifies you
[speaking now to my girlfriend]. your anger scares me. i don't know what to
do, i forget myself. i never get angry. i never show it. i get angry all
the time."you have to be very strong
cause you'll start from zero over & over again"thinking of who i used to be.
days & days & days --forgive me. i can't explain this to anyone. this is my indecisive memento,
these levels of edit i put myself through. forgive me.paula
I was just hoping she did not think I'm writing this because she mentioned my name. But I was *really* moved by the mail. Got a reply today:Subject: ...this writing is not exempt...
Date: Sun, 15 Aug 1999 16:57:34 +0200
From: Philipp Hofmann <philipp.hofmann@mail.uni-bielefeld.de>
Organization: Entropic Empire
To: Electrngun@aol.com
References: 1Dear Paula,
thanks for your beautiful and very intense mail. Although I wasn't prepared for it this morning when I downloaded it among 29 surveys. It did make the top of my head come off. I don't really know how to respond because all that you've written is so close to me, though I think that we're very different persons and personalities. Your mail has been one of the most moving I've read since I've joined undertow. Thanks for posting it.
"And if the building is burning
move towards that door
but don't put the flames out.
There's a bit of magic in everything
and then some loss to even things out."remembering you,
philipp
Subject: Re: ...this writing is not exempt...
Date: Sun, 15 Aug 1999 12:36:28 -0400 (EDT)
From: Electrngun@aol.com
To: philipp.hofmann@mail.uni-bielefeld.dePhilipp,
Remember the post you sent to the Undertow ("is it perfume from a dress that makes me so digress?") and the last part of it was absolutely incredible to me: the part about you can be so close to someone you love, and they're sleeping next to you, and you want them to believe in you and "explain the world" to you. Even though we've never met and are half a world away, you are one of the people I trust to explain the world to me, even if you can't explain it to yourself.
Thanks and take care, Philipp,
paula
So just for the sake of completeness here#s the message she
mentiones:
So there you go. No, I can't make any sense of my life, either. One day I'm thinking that I'm just a creep and then I suddenly get such a mail. And there was even more mail:Subject: is it perfume from a dress that makes me so digress?
Date: Tue, 20 Jul 1999 01:02:39 +0200
From: Philipp Hofmann <philipp.hofmann@mail.uni-bielefeld.de>
Organization: Entropic Empire
To: "Undertow@vega.net" <undertow@vega.net>
It's 00:08 now. My french window is open wide in my flat on the third floor. It's still warm outside, although there's a light rain falling down. My fiancée is asleep already. I'm missing her warm body and her smell now although she's only one room away. There's a big, sluggish ruby-red moon hanging low above the houses. Philip Glass is playing "Metamorphosis II" and the voice of T.S.Eliot is reading "The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock". It's so still outside! There's occasional lightning in the distance. So far away that the thunder won't reach the city. And the black sky is lit up for a split-second and the silhouettes of huge clouds appear and disappear in the same moment. I would love to hear this poem read by Suzanne. This is a mail without an aim, as you may have guessed already. So you might as well stop reading here. I feel like I'm missing something or someone that I know I can't have now. I've been singing this song all day long. We've been playing it at rehearsal tonight but our guitarist always played the wrong chords in the chorus, which was annoying. This has been a strange day. Too hot and far too humid. I couldn't concentrate. I could not work on my term paper about the initiation-motif in Maxine Hong-Kingston's The Woman Warrior. (If anybody could help me with this I would appreciate it very much!) The air was hardly breathable, people were nervous and touchy. And then all those strange mails from Undertow. Wow, what's going on there? I tried to make up my mind about it all day long. Tried to decide what I think about it. Tried to think of anything to say about it. But the more I tried to the less I could make any sense of it. So I'm mailing just to say that I can't say anything about the debate. But it's an odd feeling to experience such a discussion on Undertow. It feels like it does not belong there.
Another thing is that I received a mail today from someone in New York who tried to run a CDRom I was sending her. It was not an SISV-CD but it was something similar: a lot of html-files centering about the topic of The Hollow Earth. And she told me that she could not run the CD on her Mac. Which caused a sharp pain in my belly because my first thought (which accompanied me all day long) was: what if Suzanne has a Mac and she can't run SISV on it?
It's 00:58, "it is impossible to say just what I mean..." says T.S. and he's right. The moon has gone. Philip Glass is still here. "I have heard the mermaids singing each to each. I do not think that they will sing to me..." I'm going to bed now, trying to shut out all these aching thoughts and irritating voices and uncertain perspectives which can make you afraid at night when there's some-body lying next to you, only half covered because of the heat and humidity, who is breathing calmly and regularly and you desperately need someone to explain the world to you.
And if he isn't, I certainly am.remember me,
philipp
(probably making another fool of himself)
So - why is it more difficult for me to deal with Uwe's mail then with Paula's? Maybe because it lets the borders blurr, the borders between the persona in the diary and the person that looks like me, smells like me, talks like me, thinks like me in the empirical world. It mixes the material and the ...and now I'm looking for a word that means something like "made out of langauge" - but not "fictional". "Linguistic" won't do, too. The material and the languagial world, perhaps. Anyway, how shall I react? As the empirical person or as the persona of this journal?Subject: Trost?
Date: Thu, 12 Aug 1999 18:59:19 -0400
From: Uwe Schwagmeier <USchwagmeier@compuserve.com>
To: Philipp Hofmann <philipp.hofmann@uni-bielefeld.de>Lieber Philipp,
gerade habe ich Dein Online-Tagebuch gelesen und bin im üblichen Zwiespalt
...
26! ----- Na, und ...?
Ich bin 30 und habe nicht so einen Aufstand davon gemacht wie zB [censored] ...
Ich fühle mich Dir nah (was machen da Altersangaben?) ...Jetzt drehe ich mich um und greife in meine Bibliothek ... 'goldener Daumen' oder so ähnlich hieß früher das Prinzip ... na ...
mal sehen .... there we are ... :"Wie schwankend sind die Urteile der Menschen! Ein einziger kleiner Umstand kann uns oft plötzlich für oder wider jemanden einnehmen. Und doch liegt uns oft an diesem Urteile, das andere von uns fällen, so viel. Aber weil wir nicht wollen, daß irgend jemand schlecht von uns urteilen solle, so
richten wir uns oft nach den Torheiten andrer, und verlieren darüber die gute Meinung edler Menschen. [...] Einem gro0en Unternehmen muß man allemal verschiedene kleinere aufopfern, sonst wird man nie zu seinem Zweck gelangen"
(Karl Philipp Moritz. "Beiträge zur Philosophie des Lebens".
Werke. Bd. 3: Erfahrung, Sprache, Denken. Hrsg. von Horst Günther; 61).Donnerschlag!
Es denkt an Dich
Dein
uwe.
They are unloading a truck with boxes of beer for the bar across
the street. The bottles are clinging and the sky is yellow. It's 14:21
and it looks like rain. No sun. "It's getting fall..." Inga said the other
day. I wish I had a 3 year scholarship for writing. And then a three year
scholarship for composing. Another piece of chocolate.
No news from Suzanne. But wisdom from Joni:
I'm listening to "Dreaming" and "Magic and Loss" from the CD with
the same title. Have put it on repeat. Have put on headphones. Yesterday
I've
strated started my first tender attempts to write
a song again. Could work. Might be a chorus. ;Might become SOMEthing. But
still I'm hesitant to present it to the rest of the band. I just don't
want it to be destroyed. And I fear that is what might happen. There's
just not enough wavelength between me and Frank I fear... well, we have
simply a different approach, a diferent background, which can be good,
which can be productive but just in this special case I think it isn't.
Which is bad.
Anyway, I was at the university this morning. In fact all morning. When I walked through Mrs. Beyn's door (she's the secretary of Prof. Braungart)she was talking to Eckhard (who is, as you might remember, my boss. He has moved to another city so I am doing the work for him here, which is basically organizing and searching the library) on the phone. I then talked to him, too. Felt awkward. Did not know what to say.
Obviously there was a little get-together of all the people I do
not want to meet today: there was Brenda - I ignored her. There was meike
- I ignored her. There was Jenny - I igtnored her. Do people actually think
that I am an inpolite, ignorant bastard?
So in the library I was trying to find all those books and articles
Eckhard wanted me to photocopy. And I was looking for that 1998 issue of
Ästhetik und Kommunikation and I could not find it. The backcatalog
ended in 1987. So I went to the counter and I asked the librarian. And
she told me, in a cool and calm voice which was on the edge of inpoliteness,
to look in the computer. I *did* think for a second about replying:"But
I don't *feel* like looking it up myself. Can't you just tell me?" but
decided against it.
Anyway after two hours of extensive search I had all the books
I wanted (nearly all) so I started copying, which went like this: Flash!
woe, woe, woe Flash! woe next page and Flash! woe, woe, woe Flash! woe
and next page and Flash! woe, woe, woe Flash! woe
I'm listening to Morrissey's "Alma Matters" from Maladjusted
and hey, why has this not been a single? Such a great chorus! Makes
you want to dance. And sing along to it.
Okay now, I think it's time now to continue working on my linguistic
paper (which I wanted to have finished by now already). See you.
so the choice I have made
may seem strange to you
but who asked you anyway?
it's my life to wreck my own way
you see to someone somewhere
oh yeah!
alma matters in mind, body and soul
in part and in whole
so the life I have made
may seem wrong to you
but I've never been surer
it's my life to ruin my own way
because to someone somewhere
oh yeah!
alma matters in mind, body and soul
in part and in whole
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Unorganic again. The rage inside me again as I sat there watching him play these meaningless chords. They are just meaningless when he plays them. Always the same, awkward and adolescent sound. And just when I thought:I don't want this I don't want this I don't want this is so far away from what we used to do this is so far away from what I feel is good, just when I thought this I suddenly saw the key to the rehearsal-room hanging there with the Disneyland keyring pendant which was Rob's and Mickey was watching from the wall, his mocking smile says it all as he recalls the rise and fall of every soldier passing. |
Do you remember how you walked with
me
I had met you just the day before, like an accident of fate, in the window there behind your door. How I wanted to break in to that room beneath your skin, but all that would have to wait. In the Carmen of the Martyrs, with the statues in the courtyard whose heads and hands were taken, in the burden of the sun; I had come to meet you with a question in my footsteps, I was going up the hillside and the journey just begun. My sister says she never dreams at night. There are days when I know why; those possibilities within our sight, with no way of coming true, some things just don't get through into this world, although they try. In the silence all around me and the ruins which surround me the memory is feeding on the songs which we have sung. We did it our own way and I know it was a good one but the journey now has ended before it had begun. |
for our supper, against the fears? And that day that I bought "Rosemary" Daniel called me and he cried and he said that you had died and I cried your weight in tears. Since then there hasn't passed a single day on which I did not think of you. Now that you have left and gone away, you are with me even more than you ever were before but what am I supposed to do? In the silence all around me and the ruins which surround me my need for you is growing like the flowers on your grave. I never cared to tell you that you were a a good friend - but I hope that where you are now is forever Disneyland. All I know of you is in my memory. All I ask is you remember me. |
I met Eckhard (my boss) yesterday and we were discussing what work
is ahead the next weeks and months. Started my linguistic paper and prepared
an online survey. Still have to wait for the reaction of Dr. Gramley and
Dr. Pätzold. Created Mail of the Month. See link on the left.
On Saturday we spent the evening with Uwe, which was cool. We were
watching a documentary about a photographer called Addams who took photos
of people living in rural Kentucky. Frightening. X-File faces staring at
you from the screen, the personified abject and Other. Anyway, during that
night Uwe and Inga said some nice things about this journal. Which made
me feel awkwared an uneasy. Don#t know why. Inga said I was being , well
ich würde mich anstellen but that's not it. Anyway, I'm defending
myself again when there's no need to because this is MY journal and I gonna
write what I want. Period. Joni Mitchell is great. Favorite songs at the
moment: Come in From the Cold.
Yesterday night I had so much on my mind - don't know what it was.
I have packedI'm complaining again. In the meantime it's 12:33 pm and I successfully manage to avoid working on my term paper. Got a mail from Inga last night. About how she's longing for the time years back when the world was under control and everything seemed to be so easy. I know what she means. I think I know how she's feeling. And I have the same impression: like we have lost something over the last two years. What Melville would express like: a sadder and a wiser boy. We have lost some part of our innocence with which we took life for granted. Life and living. Now there are more worries, more doubts, more problems that are threatening the very way we live. But also more reflection, more observation. And now we suddenly are surprised by the feeling of being old. Of having wasted chances. Of not having taken opportunities. Regret. For the first time in our lifes. And the sudden panic that you will never become what you intended to be.
I'm leaving this place,
empty as it is now
that you have left.
I have waited long enough
The milk got sour
the trash is rotting.
I did not dare to leave the house
of fear I'd miss your call.
I did not sleep, just waited
and anticipated
your coming home.
But the letters you snail mailed
never arrived.
And I guess my life will go on
just as it was before.
Except that the fine line
between song and sign
will not blur anymore.
I have packed
all that reminds me of you
and though they're heavy
I'll take these things with me
so that leaving does not mean:
leaving you behind.
When you come back
and read this
I hope that you will follow
and find me.
While waiting I listened
to the same songs over&over again.
I know them by heart now.
Know them better than I
knew you.
And I guess my life will go on
just as it was before
except for these word
like drops from a tap
that does not close anymore.
I have packed.
I have to go.
Have to go on.
I know you understand this.
And I guess my life will go on
just as it was before
except that this crack in my heart
will not heal
anymore.
okay, okay: I'm not working on my term paper. So what? I'm gonna pick up Inga from the station soon. I'm still listening to Joni K8tchell. And I still cna't type. I'm wodering whether I will ever write such great songs. The other week I tried to record some songs with just one voice and guitar. I thought I might still make it solo, if anything else fails. You don't need much. Suzanne and Joni have prooved it: just a guitar, a voice and songs. So i tried. But I didn't take into account that you have to be able to PLAY the guitar, that you a GOOD voice and GREAT songs. So I was rather disappointed by the recording results. Wish I knew some musicians. "Come in from the Cold" again. For the 23rd time today.
Anyway...No news from Suzanne about SISV. No news from Gramlold
about my term paper. Instead discussions about Plath on Undertow. I just
realize that I have no stories. Which is not good if you want to become
a writer. I have nothing to say. And I wonder where other people take those
stories from. Maybe it#s better just to stop talking if you've got nothing
to say. Or you just continue saying nothing nothing nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
nothing
Mind you: this is not a poem. This is my
despair. And I wish I had a river I could
skate away on. But it's not even fall yet.
PS: It's strange. Everytime I'm saving the august99.htm
file the computer or somebody adds a couple of blank lines. Very
strange. A lot of blank lines have suddenly appeared giving the document
a strange structure. Suddenly bold, 30point sentences are surrounded by
blank lines so that at one point in scrolling down they are alone on the
screen. Like a slogan from an ad. Like a commercial statement. "Buy now"
or something. Strange. The machine is adding her own aesthetics.
so, jetzt ist schluß hier mit den lustigen bunten clownereien. muß heute in die sprechstunde von pätzold. und das am
Anyway, I have presented the new song (which is, by the way, based on that Neil Diamond-like chord pattern I've been writing a couple of weeks ago) at rehearsal yesterday and we tried to play it with the whole band. Could work. The bass is not quiet enough for *my* taste, but that's just me. But it could work. I especially like the soft drums Daniel is playing.
We are going to see Morrissey in Hamburg in October. Patricia (Daniel's girl friend) came by yesterday to ask me whether we wanted some tickets, too. How could I say no? I've never seen him in concert before and I'm really curious. And who knows whether there will be another chance?
I've got to say a thing or two about the quarrel on sunday. About fifteen minutes after I wrote the coloured lines there was peace again.
...and there are more and more lines coming, coming back to me, pouring from a place i do not know and I don't know whether they are good and I don't know what to do with them except for writing them down without a purpose yes I wish I was in a position to USE them to USE them to USE them for a song or a book, to expose them, to let them be read because that's wht they are striving for: and i'm ashamed to admit it.
I'm listening to "uh-oh" by david byrne. Uwe gave it to us the
other week. It's not as bad as I thought it was. In fact it's pretty cool.
It's just a shame that byrne did not include the lyrics. I hate CDs without
lyrics. Almost as much as I hate linguistic term papers or office hours
of people who teach linguistics. Dr. Pätzold looked at the questionnaire
I prepared to find out something about the use of emoticons in online communication
and made some suggestions for improvement such as "Hm, 'informal and formal'
eMails...do you think the informants will know what you mean?" "Good point,
Dr. P. you're right, actually I wanted to hand out the questionnaire to
idiots only..."
And I only wonder why it takes so long for me to finish that damned paper. Actually I do not wonder. I guess it's because it scares me to go forward. This would be my final "Schein". After it the exams starts. And I'mscared of them (naturally). But what's worse: I'm scared what will be after the exams. I'm scared of going forth. This is not a good thing and not a pleasant feeling. |